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Whoa. That was like the most casual ending twist ever. :D You write really well, your stories are awesome. This one is great, right around the middle I thought I figured it out, then I changed my mind, then you write something completely different. Just... Cool.

I'm lost for words. Murderous cops? Talk about ambitious. I like how you used the two suspects as red herrings.

Oh my God. Very good story, but I hate that officer! You're talented.

how do u do it? that was so good!

oOoOoO... i lyked dat twist... but i kuld kindah guesh it... *shrugz* dun ask how... but lyke.. hmm... it shtill kindah shocked meeh ta fynd out i wush rite.... off ta reed more ub ur storiez....

weird twist..

That was just messed up. I thought you were spinning a real mystery there, and then you throw in...well, I don't like reviews that give away the story, so I'll just say "an interesting twist" at the end, there. Don't know how plausable it is, but it was interesting.

AWESOME STORY. YOU SHOULD MAKE IT LONGER AND WRITE MORE ABOUT DETECTIVE EDWARDS SCREWING WITH JACOBS HEAD. YOU PROBABLY COULD GET A WHOLE NOVEL OUT IT.

Hey--this is a really good story...it was interesting from the beginning, good title and everything; although kinda confusing in the middle, the ending is mad nice. Oh--and it is different(a good different)