this is certainly a very impressive work of art. it is one of my favourite out of all of the cockbain collection. keep em comin yo!

omg! thats amazing! even better than the zoo one! haha i like your rhyming, then the "It;s been fun" through me offguard. here's some "watery" poems to check out! ahah check it out)-
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"So-this-is-a-River"
"THE River," corrected the Rat.
"And you really live by the river? What a jolly life!"
"By it and with it and on it and in it," said the Rat. "It's brother and sister to me, and aunts, and company, and food and drink, and (naturally) washing. It's my world, and I don't want any other. What it hasn't got is not worth having, and what it doesn't know is not worth knowing. Lord! the times we've had together..."
- Kenneth Grahme, The Wind in the Willows

That was a wonderufl homage to water, Jess.