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| suLL 2005-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseit has a good "sense" of power and mystey. I like the way it is unfinished and can be flexible to more than one situation. Good work! |
| Oath 2004-08-31 ch 1, | abuseGreat detail and emotion; very sad. I'm 50% dutch and my grandma moved from indonesia when she got married. *high five* |
| smartangel 2004-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abusefearell.. u must be reading from a dictionary... where are all these "good" words cumin from...ur head?? i dun think so...hehe..lol.. good job... nice poem...very...(wat do u say) bloody...hehe... best wishes...(hehe..lol) im gonna destroy u.. - hurricane r |
| br8kin-d-habit 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abusethis is great, I could feel the emotion and especially how the person feels. your poetries are good, by the way are you freinds with secretkey? I just get the feeling. and...when I said u were cute I meant in a harmless way, so don't freak out. good vocabs: trickled, penatrated, griped. have to keep that in mind. do u read the dictionary? |