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suLL
2005-02-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseit has a good "sense" of power and mystey. I like the way it is unfinished and can be flexible to more than one situation. Good work!
Oath
2004-08-31
ch 1,
abuseGreat detail and emotion; very sad.
I'm 50% dutch and my grandma moved from indonesia when she got married.
*high five*
smartangel
2004-08-31
ch 1, anon.
abusefearell..
u must be reading from a dictionary...
where are all these "good" words cumin from...ur head?? i dun think so...hehe..lol..
good job...
nice poem...very...(wat do u say) bloody...hehe...
best wishes...(hehe..lol)
im gonna destroy u..
- hurricane r
br8kin-d-habit
2004-07-20
ch 1,
abusethis is great, I could feel the emotion and especially how the person feels. your poetries are good, by the way are you freinds with secretkey? I just get the feeling. and...when I said u were cute I meant in a harmless way, so don't freak out.
good vocabs: trickled, penatrated, griped. have to keep that in mind. do u read the dictionary?
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