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Olivia Muldoon 2006-04-11 . chapter 1
That was really good. Go you!
Casey Drake 2006-03-21 . chapter 1
like i said. I like making up music.

I would listen to this song on a CD...

:) CD
Cisco Combo 2005-06-20 . chapter 1
Good - how long ago was this?

I think if I reviewed 'The Scarred Ones' we'd be here all day!

Cisco
Anje 2005-06-04 . chapter 1
I feel the exact same way, going in my favorites. What's a perfect world?
Jack Milo 2005-04-13 . chapter 1
i think that it is was a bit of both. It's good, but its not like your other material.
Furball*of*Evilness 2005-04-04 . chapter 1
You say that you think you one by default, but I think you earned it. This poem is very moving and poiant.

My favorite line is: "I read the story about a hero of myth,If only life worked out as well as this"

I mean, it rhymes and doesn't rhyme, and just is so good! ^^ I loves this! *gives a sprite and a sugar cookie* You are very talented yo.
KaZza-BaZzA 2005-03-23 . chapter 1
Very good, better then most of the really popular stuff these days
Dying Without Gackt 2004-09-20 . chapter 1
Oh my that was so good...I think exactly the same way.
Ponytail Goddess 2004-07-21 . chapter 1
This is really good. I see why you won the contest.
-P.G.
Aleara conlin 2004-07-21 . chapter 1
It doesn't matter whether or not the others were a piece of ** because this would've won anyways, it's beautiful. Great job:)!
Mayaj 2004-07-21 . chapter 1
Hmm, sweet. Very sweet, made me go all sad and warm on the inside... We all know that feeling of praying for something hopeless... This was good.
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