Reviews for Precious Knife - FictionPress.com

ezilyconfused 2004-07-21 ch 1,	abusedon't believe the blade, whatever you do.. it only wants to ruin your life... the last 6 lines are really well done.. i like the words that you used
Eirien 2004-07-21 ch 1,	abuseVery powerful. The way you adress the blade makes this really special and effective. The pointe in the last line is a strong ending that sort of turns the whole poem around or undercuts it. To me, the urgency in the speaker's appeal to the knife is heart-wrenching. I know of the sruggle involved ... Would you do me a favour and have a look at my "Razor Touch"? It's like a counterpart to this poem, and you might like its message.
cmcp 2004-07-21 ch 1,	abusei like the realization at the end..a unique twist from all the other knife poems. I like the contrasts you put in here too..nice work!