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| Earthsong12 2005-06-15 ch 1, | wow...I'm speechless. This is amazing, I love the way the words flow, and just...wow. Great job! |
| jelie36 2004-12-21 ch 1, | Wow, this was amazing too! I really liked it. I can't explain exactly what it was, maybe the refrain. Either way, great poem! -jelie36- |
| pacopuppy 2004-07-27 ch 1, | i loved that poem! thanks for all of your reviews. if you ever wanna chat, just im me on LuVs2sHoP23. ;). *megan* |
| Happy-Platipus 2004-07-22 ch 1, | Honey, are you ok...? What did I miss when I was away? I need to talk to you. Its funny how people write there best poems when they are either really depressed or really happy. |
| Ed Girl 2004-07-21 ch 1, | This is excellent. The images that the words create is genius. This is going on my favorites. |
| Sunflower Philosophy 2004-07-21 ch 1, | Dude, what happened NOW? Sorry I was so miserable today, just for some reason being around you and Shareen together really annoyed me. It's like you both lower your maturity level by ten notches when you're hyper together... And that HURT, by the way! Great job here... the imagery is strong... I agree the shea's surrender here, though, that it's kind of vague. Nonetheless, the "flood me crimson" line really adds something to it... very strong. m~* Sunflower, anyone? |
| shea's surrender 2004-07-21 ch 1, | I like it, it seems a little odd at first, and you're right, it is depressing, but that doesn't mean it isn't any good. Besides, most of the poems on this site are about breakups and heartrending sorrow, so... Anyway, back on subject: good poem, I don't think I could pick a favorite line, it's all so good. |
| EternalTimexX 2004-07-21 ch 1, | intersting use of words... ~*Keep writing*~ |