You're right. It is a bit cliche, the whole idea of it, but Kris keeps things amusing. She's cool.

'tis still difficult to pay attention, with your masses of description, but I still enjoyed it. It's interesting and I'm kind of curious where this was going.

Not that you'll finish it, considering, neither of you have to great of a history with finishing cowritten stories. *glare*

The first time I looked at this fic, the length frightened me. Now that I look at it, even I've written longer stuff. (SCARY!) This was interesting... Highly descriptive, sometimes difficult for those of us with a short attention span, but still interesting. I shall read chapter two.

I saw your profile, btw, it was REALLY easy to tell who was who, and not just by the fire and silver thing. Your insanity's differ. (Wait, since when is insanity a noun?!?)

Are ya guys EVER going to update? I KNOW you've written more. :P

-Kitzy

o.o wow... this is a GREAT story!! ^^ *faves*

well this was a long chapter, not that theres anytthing wrong with that though. You two have an amazing fic going here and I'll be waiting to see how the rest of it turns out,you two are really talented

wow that sure was an interest and slightly confusing way to start the story, sounds like it will be a great story. I definatly liked what i read, it grabbed my interest almost straight away, good woork

very nice story, i like it alot...i cannot wait to hear more about this. Peace!~*

This is a really great story; eloquently written and sure to be a classic! Very inventive! Great job Phoenix!

wow, cool story
ps. i friend of AA-M

Die. Wait, give me the rest of the chpaters THEN die.
This is REALLY good, just so you know, but you really must work on the summary. That and update. Then die. A long painful death.
Bye.
-Niamh