wow...harsh stuff. i like it - you use precise words to get across your meaning. very nice.

-satinsmoke-

ps. thanks for reviewing forgotten autumn nights!

isolated, luv tat poem

OOH...excellent! Bravo! Great job! You are better than me at poetry, too!

really good, i can relate and identify with this a lot and in so many ways. i know how it is to isolate urself or to be isolated by other people, you got the feelings down very well and the emotions really jump out when you read it, great job. lots of love ~AllyCred~

i can relate, but it is nice sometimes to be away from everyone. nice work =0)

Interesting. I like how you portray the person as trapped, but not ignorant and all knowing, but powerless.

P.S. Thanks for the review!

I can really relate to this.It's a beautifu piece of work, i'm looking forward in seeing some more of your work!=)!

i like this a lot..it's very sad, but it also is a very beautiful piece too. you can feel the betrayal in it. nice job!