hhihihih nice

great images, my favs being the dancer and the last line, as well as the whole first stanza. good poem!

OH...AH...awesome! It cnnects to different perspectives, but the same ones too! Great job!

omg... this is a beautiful poem, all i can say is like *WOW*, its so vivid and just beautiful.lots of love ~AllyCred~

P.S~~ thanks for the review appreciate it.

ah... i love the sea!Wonderful poem on favourite subject.^^keep writing!

~Never the never~

amazing work here, you have beautiful control over your imagery and language. nice work!