Hello.

You reviewed my poem before (Plastic Skank Boy - thanks!) so I thought I'd check out your work. I really love the way you wrote this poem, Lon. It is written so well, so truthful and just plain beautiful. Seriously.

Cheers,Bella.P.s: Check out my other account, TruthFreedomBeautyLove. I am weird and have two accounts. Don't mind me :)

Is this the last Lorenzo piece?D.

GORGEOUS! COMPLETELY WONDERFUL! This is definatly my fave from you so far! i look forward to reading more, especially if they are as beautiful as this!

Intense and beautiful. Very lustfully romantic.

Very simple, very beautiful. The diction portrays so much more than had you gone on longer...excellent!