Since the last reviewer said that your story is fanfiction, you should have posted it at the sister site w.fanfiction.net . Fanfiction is not allowed to be uploaded here at fictionpress.com .

Hey, I just read the book "Battle Royale" a few weeks ago and it was great. This is more fanfiction, but I'm guessing that the site didn't have a category for this so you posted it here. I'll keep reading to see how this turns out anywayz,
David

I'm writing the second chapter as we speak, i know this one ended abruptly but i had two/three stories on the go at the same time.
Sorry for letting you down on this one but the second chappy will make up for it, don't worry. =)
*~Ravyne~*