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Reviews For: Lolita's Ugly Stepsister

xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox
2004-08-05
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, a fine read except a little bit unflowing at some parts. Keep writing. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
Rhyno Holter
2004-07-24
ch 1,
abuseGood... very good... I'm surprised, I thought this would suck. Good work, keep it going!
An Inside Joke
2004-07-22
ch 1,
abuseInteresting start- unusual humor, only a little choppy.
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