FictionPress.com - let the words flow
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Lolita's Ugly Stepsister
Ephemeral Seraphim 2004-08-05 . chapter 1
Interesting, a fine read except a little bit unflowing at some parts. Keep writing. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
Rhyno Holter 2004-07-24 . chapter 1
Good... very good... I'm surprised, I thought this would suck. Good work, keep it going!
An Inside Joke 2004-07-22 . chapter 1
Interesting start- unusual humor, only a little choppy.
Return to Top