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| xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, a fine read except a little bit unflowing at some parts. Keep writing. Hasta luego. chibichocobo |
| Rhyno Holter 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abuseGood... very good... I'm surprised, I thought this would suck. Good work, keep it going! |
| An Inside Joke 2004-07-22 ch 1, | abuseInteresting start- unusual humor, only a little choppy. |