Interesting so far. Write more, I beg of you! I want to hear more, please!

O! :Squeals: Oh…my…god…

I love it!

And that is simply all I have to say. It has captured me!

So... would you mind continuing this story? I love how Damien speaks to the reader.. and it would be really unfair if you stopped here.. you haven't even told us how he became a vampyre (or is it vampire in your story? lol)...

I really like it so far!

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for your review on 'Lucinda' i had started the story using the name Raven... and then realized i used that name in 'Jessica' so about half way through i had to go back and change them all to A'Marie... obviously i missed a few. thank you for pointing them out i have fixed them )

i luv it. i luv how you brought in the char from your other story. makes the story all that much better. plz update soon.

ok, i love it, you must keep writing this story! hope you update soon!
G*M

that's really good. i luv vampires and it's a good begining to a story. please update.