wow. and you said i was good.
i love the way this poem runs. it makes you want to go faster and faster andfasterandfaster and you can really feel haste and almost panic in the words... it sounds.. afraid and denial-filled, for lack of better words.
keep it up, ya? and thankyou for the great review... hugs, reids.

i can relate in some ways, like the friend becoming more thing... yea, well this is really well-written. Keep writing