i like your use of elements (night, clouds, etc) your closing is a little anti-climatic, but anti-climatic to your advantage

I love this poem. The imagery is great and the juxtaposition of some of the words really makes you thing. It struck a core with me!

bittersweet. this just flows so well, the rhymes are unforced, the words so well chosen, everything about it is just so beautiful. keep up the very good work

Interesting poem. It has a nice rhythm to it. I like it.

i... i... i'm speechless, i really do like this... Keep writing, you have a real talent