This is another beautiful one!

I think I was rather emotional on the previous review. Too emotional for my taste, at least. I also read your bio only after the review, so yes, it was a quick blurb. I think your script is better than your poetry, and to improve, perhaps you could use more symbolism, images that portray your themes better. I couldn't really feel the poem, if you know what I mean, or maybe I'm just incompetent. I vote the former.

This poem is so fricking good, i wish i could write this kind of poetry. Is the best poem i have read on here.

Oh. Oh. So soft and nostalgic and perfect. I really think you should submit this piece for publication – at least to your uni’s literary mag, if nowhere else. No extra polish necessary. ** gorgeous.

I really like this...Great imagery...And has the ammusing thought that things will never be real again, when the best of all realities was a dream...And that is truth...But of what beauty manifests in this world, much of it is simple and very attainable...That you captured, and that I adore...
A very good life to you,
The Charlatan.

Very moving. It is wonderful to feel lighter than air, isn't it?

You infused marvelous imagery into this poem; I especially like the lines, "A falling man will feel no weight at all:/ He is lighter than air." You chose your title wisely, as well. Great job!

Wow. This is a beautiful poem, it truly is. I am impressed.

The title is stunning. The connotation of "the stars had passed us by" is so final and unchangeable that anything written after that seems superfluous--not that it is. The poem itself is well-written and dreamy and surreal.