Very lovely. You use a good choice of words and repetiton to effeciently get your idea across. The layout works well too. =) And the the last line- "And even we must fear this sky" cloncludes in beautifully.

another masterpiece... love your style! very nice flow to it..

Your conclusive line was awesome -- "And even we must fear this sky." It wrapped up the poem masterfully. Really, a great poem overall.

wow strong words great poem keep up the good work
ps plz review some of my work