i like this too! but i like the wolf one better. *sighs* i just wish you would continue them. you know.. like those 3 chapter stories or something. although your stories actually have alot of potential. yeah. >< hope yo'd write on!

wow this is so kool so far!! plz write more asap:D

hey why don't you accept anonymous reviews? there's a box on your account settings page you can unclick, since it checks itself by default. unless, of course, you don't want anonyomous reviews. heh but those you can just delete =D
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this was an awesome read. you have a great style. or maybe it's just me ... i really like using short sentences myself, and you have a real skill with them. intriguing story and characters, and really subtle emotion. nicely done =)
~k8

that was awesome! the story really kept me captivated all throughtout! you should be a published writer!!