I hate it when I blush...it's such an inconvenient biologic phenomenon...

Ashley this little interuption of conversations at the end of the paragraphs is really ** me off. Please just like end the chapter at a boring part or something and finish your stories! I am dying to read the next chapter yto all of them so i guess i'll catch you on the flip side.

trista's an awesome character. very interesting story. hope you post more eventually

GREAT CHAPTER! Keep going! You know what? I'm in grade 7 and I'M learning Pathageum's Theorum...weird. LOL UPDATE!

This isn't the end of the story is it? You so can't do that to me! I like it bumches! Update soon!

plz UPDATE! plz! YOU ARE A big MEANIE HEAD IF YOU DON'T! JK JK JK JK JK

this was pretty awesome, in an odd way...erm...yeah... O_O ... ANYWHO, you desperately need to update the prey and the predator... 'cause if you don't, all the little dancing mushrooms will die!

P.S. I'm not on drugs, I swear.

Yipee! You finally updated. Your story is progressing nicely. Is Jake in the same room as Trista, or are they in different rooms, because if they are in the same room, won't he be really jealous that she has a crush thingy on Thomas? Oh well, the Thomas character is a nice twist to the plot. Trista needs someone else who needs a friend who acts just like her...though the cigarettes and alcohol is a little extreme. Keep updating, it's a good story, and I want to keep reading! -Julia

Brilliant..That was freagin AWESOME. Dude...you completly capture the meaning of cliche...but in the most beautiful way...wow that rhymes..See i am meant to be a poet. Not a writer... I would never match you anyway..Love YaLuna Aka Shoe Hey Shley.. GO LONG!Fo Sho

Wonderful chapter, definitely worth the wait. Can't wait to read more.

did u just say it was the end? no its not. no. ur gonna keep writing cuz i wanna know wat happens damnit balls. good chapter by the way.

o...this is getting interesting! its such a good story..i don't know what its doing with only 22 reviews! its worth over 100 already! albeit chapter 6 was a bit weird...me not really understanding how trista went out of character there...but wht the hey ur the creater...anyways...update soon please! this is just starting to get interesting!

I am sensing a love triangle

update SOON!! Thomas is a interesting character and reminds me of a friend. update.

Shley, I've gotta hand it to you. you are one hell of a writer, especially if you can make something as cliche as this good. Well...I'm just sittin in computerclass, being a dork, and telling everyone to read you **. Hehe.
Love always
Shoe