i like it... and i agree, the meaning of christmas has been destroyed. Gotta love that title by the way, its brilliant.

wow... this is really cool! I think about this every Christmas, and swear I'm gonna let it be about Jesus, not the parties and presents and stuff, but... you know how it goes. Anyway, I loved this poem!
~Lauren

beautiful... and very true

this is beautiful.

'Truth came down to the lying
Life came down to the dying' - Awesome, awesome two lines right there. The last question you pose is also quite striking. I find myself often not knowing whether I'd really want to celebrate Christmas like others do. I don't know... It's supposed to be such a wonderful day for us just to take in what God has truly given... but it just never ends up that way, does it?

YAYNESS! FINALLY someone feels the way i do about this topic! keep writing, sis! (sister in Christ, that is)