C'est tres exquisite. I love it!

Very good! I like the style of this poem and what it's saying. However, the last paragraph/stanza doesn't quite fit as an ending. I think this poem could be twice as long with a more complete ending.

this is too ironic for me to even believe... the irony to a true-life story that happened with me... the girl, Sam... her and I were in a situation like the one in the "letter" for a year and a half before we met... it went sour from there because she wasnt anything like she was letter wise, phone calls, online... i saw a totally different person, but... anyways, i think ill have to add this to my favorite story list...

I really like this. I too like the idea of soul mates. I can't think of a better way to find one! ;o) Cleaver idea perfectly brought to life. Well done.

haha beautiful thought. beautiful idea. i've always wanted a soulmate; sometimes i think i DO have one. but oh well.
v nice.

That would be a the perfect letter to put in a bottle, lol. well written... ~Keep writing