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Aneesa 2005-01-31 . chapter 1
Aww I think it's sweet in that sad way.
Been to Hell 2004-12-30 . chapter 1
awesome
MissLeigh021 2004-12-19 . chapter 1
reminds me of a song. this is really nice.
ColdFrost 2004-12-07 . chapter 1
A great haiku. I love the last line, it just has the feeling of finality (at least to me). Well written!
Melissa Lea Night 2004-08-12 . chapter 1
i think this is my favorite so far
David Stephen 2004-07-30 . chapter 1
Again, brilliant. You have the structure correct and you haven't forced anything to obtain it. This is very good. David
Bob'N'Cat 2004-07-25 . chapter 1
Well, I don't have much to comment on considering that it's a haiku. I'll just say that it was okay, a little bit sad [not as in it's badly written; I mean the emotional term], but okay. Good job.
Dracula, Lord of the Vampires 2004-07-25 . chapter 1
Good, very good.
twilightwriter07 2004-07-24 . chapter 1
Nicely done...it's so sad.
Queen of dawn 2004-07-24 . chapter 1
o.k short and to the point don't know what to say. i'm going to read a longer fic you've written and comment on that.
redsbury 2004-07-23 . chapter 1
Very nice! It's simple, but it's good.
Flying Mango Bean Tackler. 2004-07-23 . chapter 1
...it made me sad...
what can you say about a haiku? It's well written...
Anyways I liked it it was good.
Good Job.
-Lost
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