 Aneesa 2005-01-31 . chapter 1 Aww I think it's sweet in that sad way. |
 Been to Hell 2004-12-30 . chapter 1awesome |
 MissLeigh021 2004-12-19 . chapter 1reminds me of a song. this is really nice. |
 ColdFrost 2004-12-07 . chapter 1A great haiku. I love the last line, it just has the feeling of finality (at least to me). Well written! |
 Melissa Lea Night 2004-08-12 . chapter 1i think this is my favorite so far |
 David Stephen 2004-07-30 . chapter 1Again, brilliant. You have the structure correct and you haven't forced anything to obtain it. This is very good. David |
 Bob'N'Cat 2004-07-25 . chapter 1Well, I don't have much to comment on considering that it's a haiku. I'll just say that it was okay, a little bit sad [not as in it's badly written; I mean the emotional term], but okay. Good job. |
 Dracula, Lord of the Vampires 2004-07-25 . chapter 1Good, very good. |
 twilightwriter07 2004-07-24 . chapter 1Nicely done...it's so sad. |
 Queen of dawn 2004-07-24 . chapter 1o.k short and to the point don't know what to say. i'm going to read a longer fic you've written and comment on that. |
 redsbury 2004-07-23 . chapter 1Very nice! It's simple, but it's good. |
 Flying Mango Bean Tackler. 2004-07-23 . chapter 1...it made me sad...
what can you say about a haiku? It's well written...
Anyways I liked it it was good.
Good Job.
-Lost |