OMG! You guys havent updated this since '04! Why not?! I really like it. There are a few typos but I want you to update soon. I really like it. I as I said before. Haha. I love you guys.

aww...i feel sorry for her..update son

This has got potential, so I hope you'll continue. I'd like to read more of this...

This was good. But you need to capitalize the words at the beginning of all sentences, not just two thirds of them. ^_~ And again, slow it down a bit, although this one wasn't as bad simply because of it's nature.
Update soon!