 Morrigan Webspinner 2004-08-27 . chapter 1Wow, that was really cool! I liked it a lot. The words you choose were great, and even though the poem did not rhyme, the way you wrote the lines and such made it seem like you did. ^_^ Very nice. I like the ending too, very well-written. |
 Laughing Fountain 2004-08-05 . chapter 1This is interesting. I think it's about the glaring that always seems to result when two people can't solve an argument. And it's so like you to be writing poetry at 2 in the morning. Insomniac! lol. LYLASMT! |
 Teacup Majoram 2004-07-23 . chapter 1It just sounds like girls and how they are really critical of each other, and seem to challenge you in just the way they look at each other, and how when somebody "less popular" then them comes along they gang up on them.
Anyways, no matter what it's about, it's great. |
 Kaitlyn J. Richards 2004-07-23 . chapter 1Hah, reminds me of a staring contest.
Anyway...nice wording,I like it!
please review back! |
 lovejoydiver 2004-07-23 . chapter 1i love the language and the flow and the intensity, great poem! |
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