powerful adn relateable.. great job

Oh god. that feeling sounds HORRIBLE. Must be so hard trying to move on, and this poem conveyed a perfect sense of the hardship. The lines were beautiful. The whole poem was beautiful.

wow! so vivid, wonderful word choice. very intense, great job!

This is as good as the rest of your poems. Really heartwrenching, anxiety flows through it.

good work, it expressed the fear well.
One thing: 'But to look up and see you there would mean you could be there watching and waiting.'
I think you may want to change that to 'But to look up and see you there would mean you could be watching and waiting' leave out the second there...it doesn't help the flow and is unnecessary.
please review back!