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ticktockman 2008-04-26 . chapter 1
lovely.
xForeverAndAlwaysx 2006-10-05 . chapter 1
oh my goodness. i love it! there aren't words for this, honestly.

everything I've read of yours so far is really good!
Duzen Broken DreamZ 2006-08-25 . chapter 1
aw how sweet! nd thnx fer the review!
LIPSTICK,FLAMINGOS,ROCKROLL 2006-08-06 . chapter 1
Aw! it so cute! ::glomps author::

LUVZEZ AND HUGZEZ

Linder-Loo!
v3point7 2006-03-18 . chapter 1
ugh, i wish i could write like you! very good job!
Todd B. James 2006-02-09 . chapter 1
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet. I'm deeply ashamed and I prostrate myself humbly in sincere apology. ^_^

This is a cute poem, but not a cutesy one. Romantic but not sappy. Wistful yet not entirely sentimental. It almost makes me wish I were the songbird, my only duty being the eternal inspiration of such talented artistes as Thyself. Perhaps it even makes me want a songbird of my own, doling out little gems of wisdom and beauty in the oh-so-subtle way that only such a delicate creature can do.

On the other side of the Meaning Chasm, I can see how much *coughMikecough* means to you. Perhaps the songbird is merely the embodiment of what he makes you feel, and when you hold him, you're really holding onto the little moments, the little memories, and the little gestures of everyday life. Or maybe Mike really is a songbird, and I'm reading far too much into it. ^_^

Nicely done, Gaki. Kudos. -T.J.

P.s., thanks for the review. First for the chapter!
le sour pickle 2005-07-10 . chapter 1
Iwas looking at my reviews . one you sent me wa,maybe you should do the radio thing, what radio thing review me to tell me.you probaly won't review me because you hate me. o well*makes sad baby face in empty room,cries*
bit14 2005-07-10 . chapter 1
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celentia 2005-05-27 . chapter 1
hey another great poem! sorry i don't review one of your stories, but i got loads of reviews to get through, coz my e-mail has decided not to let me recieve mail, so i have to look at my review by going into the poem, and it's driving me mad coz i can't remember what ones ive already reviewed. i really liked the repetion of "my songbird" it gives a nice stucture to the poem. so god damm it. WRITE MORE.as you can probly guess im bored which is why this short review has turned into an essay, i think your a bad influence on me. but i don't care coz ive nothing better to do. oh god. how much have i writen. im gonna go i don't trust myself not to turn this into a load of rambling which it already is.thanks for reviewing my poem. luv celentia

*celentia hastely pushes the submit review button*
no one 2005-05-23 . chapter 1
Cheese is good for you
Black Panther Z 2005-05-09 . chapter 1
sshort, but touching
simpleplan13 2005-04-24 . chapter 1
aw so sweet and well done... thanks for your review!
Flamevixen 2005-03-30 . chapter 1
Nice poem. Who's Mike?
farfetched fantasies 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
cute! ^_~* ooh! ooh! looky! I make a birdy icon thingamabob see! "> neat huh?
flights.of.fantasy 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
aww.. that's sweet.. a lil cliched but veri nice. =) but dont all birds fly away sooner or later.. especially those who are in the cages.. they cant resist the lure of the blue blue sky..
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