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| eLm0 2007-09-19 ch 1,  | abuseWow. You're good. And I mean really, really, really good. You write romance and what I call "death" poetry both really well. I mean... I was crying at the end. The part, "Your dead inside" (I think you meant "you're," you might want to change that) made me shudder. :] |
| Cloudie 2006-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... I was shocked towards the part where you wrote the rape part. The poem really flows. |
| raelia 2006-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abusewhoa. dark and morbid. rape's a nasty thing. it's a good poem though. expressive. |
| Eccentricmonkey 2006-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI almost never post reviews, but this poem was amazing. It flows perfectly and is filled with a lot of feeling. good job. |
| Tr APeze-sWiNGer 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuse"He slits your throat and then gives you a goodnight kiss"--really powerful. It alludes to so much more. |
| Matthew James Current 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abusePretty good work for an "attempt at poetry." If you ever want advice for writing poems, feel free to e-mail me and I'd be glad to help. I'd give you a more in depth analysis, but I'm not quite feeling up to it at the moment. I just wanted to thank you sincerely for your review earlier. It meant a lot to me. Thank you, very much. |
| bulletproof.cupid 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abusewow O.o I liked it... in fact, it's one of the best poems i've read on this site. hah but that's probably because i read fics most of the time. hmm we'll i'm going through most of what you've written here, cause franckly, they're amazing. keep up the good work and well, awesome with the poem. it was fast but effective =o hmm so, go toronto! l8er... |
| Jade johnstone 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt’s blunt. No cryptic messages, or hidden meanings. Just the truth, shoved right in our faces. Its cruelly truthful, i adore it. |
| mo 2005-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseu need ur head checked! |
| Beautifula 2005-03-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was very intense and fast paced. The speed of it seems to quicken up as I read this. Really amazing. |
| SleepDontWeep 2004-08-24 ch 1, | abuseholy **! well its different! i really love how dark it is! WELL DONE! much love and admiration2u! please review one of my two storys: thats not how it hapened r the ramblings of a suposed deranged lunatic! PLEASE I WOULD LOVE UR OPINION! |
| Scarlet Sins 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abuseYay! You posted it! I said I'd review your poem if you posted it, but i was hoping I'd be the first. I'm SIXTH! *sigh* oh well, you know I liked your poem and it's NOT amateurish. That's better than a lot of stuff I've read and I'm sure other ppl love it too.=) |
| Jazzy Kitty 2004-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery interestingg... I actually liked it a lot, if I'm allowed to say that without coming across as a mad axe-man. :o) Seriously, though, I did enjoy it. I thought the words were incredibly powerful. I especially liked the beginning, since you can't really tell what it's all about until you hit about half-way through the poem, then it all makes sense. Great job! |
| izzy-bh 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abusewow that was disturbing but great - if you know what i mean. i can't see anyone writing this stuff unless theyve experienced it themselves (which im dearly hoping you havent). good work |
| Mass Descent 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abusethat was disgustingly well done. i felt everything- |