oh my god, this poem is so powerfully blunt. it doesn't seem to make an attempt to hide itself from what it is. it kind of reminds me of lovely bones for some reason

Wow.

You're good. And I mean really, really, really good.

You write romance and what I call "death" poetry both really well. I mean... I was crying at the end. The part, "Your dead inside" (I think you meant "you're," you might want to change that) made me shudder.

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Wow... I was shocked towards the part where you wrote the rape part. The poem really flows.

whoa. dark and morbid. rape's a nasty thing. it's a good poem though. expressive.

I almost never post reviews, but this poem was amazing. It flows perfectly and is filled with a lot of feeling. good job.

"He slits your throat and then gives you a goodnight kiss"--really powerful. It alludes to so much more.

Pretty good work for an "attempt at poetry." If you ever want advice for writing poems, feel free to e-mail me and I'd be glad to help. I'd give you a more in depth analysis, but I'm not quite feeling up to it at the moment.

I just wanted to thank you sincerely for your review earlier. It meant a lot to me. Thank you, very much.

wow O.o I liked it... in fact, it's one of the best poems i've read on this site. hah but that's probably because i read fics most of the time. hmm we'll i'm going through most of what you've written here, cause franckly, they're amazing. keep up the good work and well, awesome with the poem. it was fast but effective =o hmm so, go toronto! l8er...

It’s blunt. No cryptic messages, or hidden meanings. Just the truth, shoved right in our faces. Its cruelly truthful, i adore it.

u need ur head checked!

That was very intense and fast paced. The speed of it seems to quicken up as I read this. Really amazing.

holy **!
well its different!
i really love how dark it is!
WELL DONE! much love and admiration2u!
please review one of my two storys: thats not how it hapened r the ramblings of a suposed deranged lunatic!
PLEASE I WOULD LOVE UR OPINION!

Yay! You posted it! I said I'd review your poem if you posted it, but i was hoping I'd be the first. I'm SIXTH! *sigh* oh well, you know I liked your poem and it's NOT amateurish. That's better than a lot of stuff I've read and I'm sure other ppl love it too.=)

Very interestingg... I actually liked it a lot, if I'm allowed to say that without coming across as a mad axe-man. :o) Seriously, though, I did enjoy it. I thought the words were incredibly powerful. I especially liked the beginning, since you can't really tell what it's all about until you hit about half-way through the poem, then it all makes sense. Great job!

wow that was disturbing but great - if you know what i mean. i can't see anyone writing this stuff unless theyve experienced it themselves (which im dearly hoping you havent). good work