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| Joelle Duran 2006-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseI like this! Simple, and very easy to identify with. |
| Argantlyn 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseVery good! Clear as well, though you speak of some emotions others might find difficult to convey into writing. |
| youzi 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abusehaha..quite a nice piece...a bit songsy..but very nice.liked the way you played with the 'addiction' thing.how you linked the 'high' and the 'withdrawal symptoms'with love..keep writing=D |
| bfmusashi 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abusehey. =) very nice poem you've got here, i especially like how you fueled the emotions into your lines and increased the feeling of this piece. i think everyone can relate to this, since everyone feels like this at least once in their life. i'd say that in the hands of a less-skilled poet this subject would've probably fallen apart, but you do a great job with it. |
| Scripture 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abuse*Gasp* I couldn't relate with that more. Fantastic. I share the exact same feelings for another.Great job I can DEFINATELY relate to this! |
| Aceandcups 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseReminds of teenage angst that everyone gets when they first enter into highschool. Very true some words and the patter, although simple, made me feel intelligent. So much, that I found myself reading it aloud. This a very open ended, emotion fueled poem as no character is described, but instead, evoking emotions. |
| KelBell 2005-01-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseis this about your to-be husband? Congrats! |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuse...wow...I really like this. I flows -very- well. please review back! |