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Laughing Fountain 2004-08-05 . chapter 1
I like the metaphors, especially the line "my white knight lost his passport". And it's true that bureaucracy is taking over the world. Just look at NT. I swear, the fact that you don't have to fill out a form to go to the bathroom is a miracle in and of itself. You must've been really depressed when you wrote these. Don't worry, Happy Endings Inc. can help you find your happy ever after! lol. If one ignores the fact that it's bankrupt. sh... This is getting to be a very long review... I should say that I REALLY like this poem. LYLASMT,
-Cisca
Chocolate Herrings 2004-07-24 . chapter 1
God, I have that feeling sometimes...it's actually why I read so much, I can read about someone elses happily ever after.
"Does the walker choose the path, or the path the walker?"
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