 Laughing Fountain 2004-08-05 . chapter 1I like the metaphors, especially the line "my white knight lost his passport". And it's true that bureaucracy is taking over the world. Just look at NT. I swear, the fact that you don't have to fill out a form to go to the bathroom is a miracle in and of itself. You must've been really depressed when you wrote these. Don't worry, Happy Endings Inc. can help you find your happy ever after! lol. If one ignores the fact that it's bankrupt. sh... This is getting to be a very long review... I should say that I REALLY like this poem. LYLASMT,
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