i love the idea/ plot of this story! i cant wait to read how things turn out. I like Alley, reminds me of me, except.. i love history, english, and biology... and fashion XDlove to read the next chapter, keep it up!-lala the panda

I this seems like it is going to be a good story! Please Update!

It was sort of short, and now i'm bummed because i really liked it! it's a cool begining and i really hope you update! i know what Ally is going through..

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So...good writing...but, ehat happens next...this can be a great story or just suck

totally cool story. Please carry on with this story i want to see where it is headed it rocks! Update soon plz lol x

I like this so far. It kind of makes fun of these 'popular' people. Pfft, diet coke and celery sticks. I love how she hides her marks :P Keep writing :D

PLZ CONTINUE!

I like this story. It's true...I've seen it at my school. Update soon!

I like this because I have been, and still am, in a similar situation so i actually feel what your character Alley is going through. Keep going with the story! ^_^

A few grammatical errors, but otherwise fine. Looking forward to more...

cute :) i love the contrast between the way she is in both situations. it's very original and well written

i like it. update soon.

It is a great beginning and i hope you keep on writing more. I can't wait to read what happens to Alley. I like the story line so far. Keep writing!

this was a very powerfull chapter. i hope that you will continue with the story

XD This could be great!! i swear this was really good. You must update. If you don't I shall sick my evil dust bunnies on you. O.o just kidding!! XD

~* Noelle *~