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| Kristal 2004-09-01 ch 1,  | abuseOh thats neat! Very neat! Go you! Keep writing you're really good! Thanx for the review! |
| tigerlily 2004-08-07 ch 1, | abuseDue to Sudafed, am not extremely eloquent right now. Quite the opposite, actually. But I reallyreally like this poem, is v. spiffycool and niftyswell and other fun stuck-together adjectives like that. ^^ Yay! *hugs DC and her amazing talent* -TL, the fuzzyheaded one |
| Jules 2004-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I quite liked the imagery of this poem -- the repetition of words in places was particularly effective. And you get a million uber points for not writing your typical teenage angst poem. ^^ Of course, when I read this poem I start thinking of really weird FFX-2 dresspheres... But maybe that's only 'cause I'm playing it at the same time... x.x Anyway, I think that's enough of my nonsensical rambling. o_o Write more 'n stuff (because stuff is NEAT.) |