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| Piper Cub 2004-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseI absolutely adored it. :D However, you might want to correct "glaze" in the 2nd line of the 2nd verse to "gaze", JIC you haven't caught it alreadyd. |
| Furine Panpasu Kitsuchi 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWish I could experiance it... Wish I could be with my girl all the time. Very emotional. |
| ladybugg 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abuseAw this is so cute. I liked this, and I really admire this poem. |
| giggles for boys 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem! |