Chris's friends didn't abandon him. And his Dad isn't all bad. I love characters that act like real people.

great story here!

*collapse in cuteness overload*
Oh my goodness. I can't think of what to say...I'm such a dork. Hehe. I'm so happy I got to read more on this couple, I loved them as much as Sebastian and Klause. So...yep. Big thumbs up :)

I love it like I love the first one. ;] Great job!

Just like 'Learning' I love this one, too.

Ha. You're making my night, man xD That made me laugh :3 S'cute too!

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Sorry I didn't sign this, but I'm too lazy to log in and the name I put down is my username.Anyway, I've read a few of your stories, and I think that they're exellent. However, they can be improved (like most things...) and I have some suggestions.First of all, I don't much like the style of writing down characters' thoughts in italics. It makes the story seem a lot more plot-device-y; and that's really not good...Fof several of the thought, you can just un-italicize it to fix it, but other places--instead of saying 'God I can't wait to graduate. Maybe then we can finally stop pretending I'm just his damned tutor. Damn dad and his stipulations anyway' in italics, you could say 'God, he couldn't wait to graduate. Maybe then he and Regan could finally stop pretending their relationship was only that of tutor and student. Chris damned his dad and his dad's stipulations anyway.'Okay, I suppose I elaborated a bit too much on that example, but do you get my point?I think that if you don't have a beta you should get one (always useful) and if you do have one, then I apologize if this is taken as insulting.Well, now I must compliment. I really liked how Chris and his friends--Tervor and Avery, I mean--and his dad reconciled at the end or throughout the story. I really liked that a lot--they seemed a lot more like faceless enemies in 'Rainbow'.I think that's about it; an end to a long and rambling review. Bye!

yay for more Chris and Regan! i like the fact that Chris' dad is much better than Bastion's. xD;

Aw, the cuteness of it all. Yay! things worked out and what i wouldn't give to see the "molestation" in the hall. It was good and well writen.

EE! I love these stories. I especially love the relationship between chris and regan though. I want more! Pretty please? Anywho, wonderful, wonderful story! Keep it up.

Yay~!
~glomptackle~ Dude. Your writing. It's awesome. Like, whoa.
~Sasa

This was both hillarious and sweet. I can just imagine his mother giving his dad a hard time. Chris is funny, but Regan's one of your best charries, as is his mom.

"There's only so many times a father can hear the words "son" and "molestation" in the same sentence."
*snickers* i really liked this. ^_^ your friend writes good stuff. heh. a nice ending for chris and regan. ^^

Aw, How sweet!
Chris and Regan are great!
I LOVE how much they love each other!
This one-shot was great from the beginning to the end! xD
So, his father really loves him!! :)
Hope to see more of your writing, specially Paradise!
Keep writing, you're a great author!
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