THIS IS JUST AWSOME! A good friend sent it to me to read ant by the end of the poem my jaw just dropped open. Brilliant choice of words and it just eye bogling and very deep feeling poem that it makes me lost for words

Hey I love that. I don't know what to do about the title. What was the feeling or event that trigered the poem maybe you could work off that?

'That break the heart, arouse a tear'
LOVE that line. Intensely loved the rest of it too. Erm.. Here, here's what you do when you don't have a title. Walk around your house or wherever you are and stare at things, you'll find a title, just whatever pops into your head, use that one. Don't ask why, just use it.

I think Untitled is perhaps the best title for this, or maybe, Unknown. Anyways, you have great imagary and some awesome phrases in this piece