 Alena D'Etoiles 2006-12-06 . chapter 1For something with so few words, this is beautiful. I love it. ::favs:: |
 Melissa Lea Night 2004-08-12 . chapter 1okay this is great, i like this one a lot |
 twilightwriter07 2004-08-05 . chapter 1Nice haiku...the line, "An empty silence," just sets the tone. I don't know about the last line here...I think the repetition of the word "alone" just threw it off slightly. Overall, nice job. |
 Eagle Seance 2004-08-03 . chapter 1I thought you've compacted a 'wide' (i don't know how else to put it) image using three haiku lines- this is great stuff... |
 David Stephen 2004-07-30 . chapter 1Hey. Thank-you for my review. This Haiku was brilliant. It is very atmospheric, and wasn't forced. You have a good piece here, which flows naturally and draws the reader in. Congratulations! David Stephen |
 Bob'N'Cat 2004-07-25 . chapter 1The last line doesn't feel right, like it doesn't fit in with the other two. That's my only problem with this, but other then that the haiku's great. |
 Derrick Edgar James 2004-07-25 . chapter 1Direct, to the point, no wasted words. Great Job. |
 Flying Mango Bean Tackler. 2004-07-25 . chapter 1You know my thing about reviewing poetry so obviously you can't expect much from me.
Well it's well done, I like it, simple and good... [like all haikus?o0;; GAH! LOST AM I!]
-Lost |
 Dracula, Lord of the Vampires 2004-07-25 . chapter 1Very good, but I think the last line could use a little tweaking because to me, it doesn't fit right. My suggestion would be 'Alone with despair. Besides that, very well done. |
 Miz E. Mak 2004-07-24 . chapter 1Cool... I love how you use the word "scattered" when talking about silence. It gives this a very neat effect to this haiku. Great work. |