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Reviews For: Alone
Alena D'Etoiles 2006-12-06 . chapter 1
For something with so few words, this is beautiful. I love it. ::favs::
Melissa Lea Night 2004-08-12 . chapter 1
okay this is great, i like this one a lot
twilightwriter07 2004-08-05 . chapter 1
Nice haiku...the line, "An empty silence," just sets the tone. I don't know about the last line here...I think the repetition of the word "alone" just threw it off slightly. Overall, nice job.
Eagle Seance 2004-08-03 . chapter 1
I thought you've compacted a 'wide' (i don't know how else to put it) image using three haiku lines- this is great stuff...
David Stephen 2004-07-30 . chapter 1
Hey. Thank-you for my review. This Haiku was brilliant. It is very atmospheric, and wasn't forced. You have a good piece here, which flows naturally and draws the reader in. Congratulations! David Stephen
Bob'N'Cat 2004-07-25 . chapter 1
The last line doesn't feel right, like it doesn't fit in with the other two. That's my only problem with this, but other then that the haiku's great.
Derrick Edgar James 2004-07-25 . chapter 1
Direct, to the point, no wasted words. Great Job.
Flying Mango Bean Tackler. 2004-07-25 . chapter 1
You know my thing about reviewing poetry so obviously you can't expect much from me.
Well it's well done, I like it, simple and good... [like all haikus?o0;; GAH! LOST AM I!]
-Lost
Dracula, Lord of the Vampires 2004-07-25 . chapter 1
Very good, but I think the last line could use a little tweaking because to me, it doesn't fit right. My suggestion would be 'Alone with despair. Besides that, very well done.
Miz E. Mak 2004-07-24 . chapter 1
Cool... I love how you use the word "scattered" when talking about silence. It gives this a very neat effect to this haiku. Great work.
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