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| Regina 2008-04-23 ch 69, anon. | abuseObservant as always. Loved the last two lines...why and how...Isn't it for humans to search out a matter to back up the rationale? |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-04 ch 68,  | abusethe beginning, especially, is very true... and I like the last stanza... it's sweet. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-26 ch 67, anon. | abuseFrom fighting and robbery to gunfights,... I got confused bc you switched from and to to I liked this... the repetition was and the story was sad, but with a happy ending. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-28 ch 65, | abuseinteresting idea... talking to the dead.. great job |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-07 ch 64, | abuseinteresting religion war thingy.. lol.. I really liek the first stanza |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-30 ch 63, | abusebeautiful personification... I |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-13 ch 62, | abuseI really like the first stanza... and again running.. lol |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 51, | abuseI like this... this is an interesting collection to put it in.. but I totally agree and thats sad bc I am of that generation |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 50, | abuseI like this.. well done |
| Midnight Doorman 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseNice use of biblical and historical references. They give your poem a very powerful backing. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 53, | abuseI love it when science is infused with poetry. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 52, | abuseIt's nice how all your poems are tied to "Thee" - it shows how all your poetry is intertwined in theme, that life is a mixture rather than separation of love, confusion, happiness, etc. |
| simpleplan13 2007-04-06 ch 48, | abusebeautiful |
| urIsLikePoison 2007-03-26 ch 7, | abuseWOW.That was some great stuff. i really loved it. you're so good.you should go and publish if you havent already. |
| simpleplan13 2007-03-25 ch 46, | abuseI like the rhyming a lot |