|Reviews for Abu Ghraib|
| simpleplan13 3/23/06 . chapter 28
lol.. love that third stanza
| simpleplan13 3/21/06 . chapter 27
| A Once Dead Poet 3/4/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful emotion is invoked!You do well with these.
But in a non-metrically restricted form, I love this. The way you use the old names of the area to bring a sense of feeling and nostalgia of the area's returning past is wonderful. I wish I could give you more constructive criticism but your complexity and thought is far above the level of any other poet I have ever read from.
| botmasta 12/29/05 . chapter 1
It's really good.
| Nobody-n-Particular 12/16/05 . chapter 26
Very ostentatious, of course purposely, and definitely makes your point.
| simpleplan13 10/22/05 . chapter 26
powerful and well done
| Mrs Fiend 10/22/05 . chapter 1
| Nobody-n-Particular 9/9/05 . chapter 25
To be impartial is a danger to those around and yourself - although can be intensely debated. Respect also is needed when opinions differ, although in the case of insanity, action is taken and humanity is forgotten.
| simpleplan13 9/9/05 . chapter 25
I liek the third stanza
| simpleplan13 7/21/05 . chapter 24
powerful and well written
| simpleplan13 7/18/05 . chapter 23
powerful adn true.. awesome poem
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/13/05 . chapter 24
I love the method of that last stanza, and the last line is very final.
| Sara Celeste 4/24/05 . chapter 1
wow you're written tons of poems, but they're really good. Hard to understand a little for me, but I guess that's just my young, thirteen year old mind.
| this is britt 4/21/05 . chapter 5
ah. by far, my favorite. really just pure truthful brilliance.
| this is britt 4/21/05 . chapter 1
the contrast strikes me. I want to cry too. it is beautiful. I forgot how beautiful your words are. too beautiful for words, perhaps.