lol.. love that third stanza

cool

Wonderful emotion is invoked!You do well with these.

(5-7-5)

But in a non-metrically restricted form, I love this. The way you use the old names of the area to bring a sense of feeling and nostalgia of the area's returning past is wonderful. I wish I could give you more constructive criticism but your complexity and thought is far above the level of any other poet I have ever read from.

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It's really good.

Very ostentatious, of course purposely, and definitely makes your point.

powerful and well done

BULLSHIT.

To be impartial is a danger to those around and yourself - although can be intensely debated. Respect also is needed when opinions differ, although in the case of insanity, action is taken and humanity is forgotten.

I liek the third stanza

powerful and well written

powerful adn true.. awesome poem

I love the method of that last stanza, and the last line is very final.

wow you're written tons of poems, but they're really good. Hard to understand a little for me, but I guess that's just my young, thirteen year old mind.

ah. by far, my favorite. really just pure truthful brilliance.

the contrast strikes me. I want to cry too. it is beautiful. I forgot how beautiful your words are. too beautiful for words, perhaps.