Very good! But what are the Potterbins going to do when he comes to the door? And is Arturo going to call the police? Please update soon so that I don't have to go crazy wondering!

Wow, good chapter! Hopefully Alex doesn't get in trouble with Lyle, that would just be horrible! Anyways, good chapter and thank you for reading and reviewing mine as well. I agree with you, Drowning Pool's song 'Step Up' would be great but I don't have their CD so I don't have the words... do you know where I'm going with this? I was thinking... ya know... if you had the words to the song... you could... e-mail them to me!? That would really be great, but if you don't have them, that's cool too. Keep going with this story, I really am getting into it!
~Death's Obsession

I absolutely love this story! You are a great writer. Please update soon!

This is really, really good. How could Lyle be so awful? It brought tears to my eyes at some points. I love your story. Please update it soon!

I like your style of writting and your characters are interesting. I encourage you to continue with this story.
~Death's Obsession

Good story so far. I like your writing style because it really enables the reader to empathize with what the characters (especially Angela) are going through. will be back to read more soon!