|Reviews for Song in Empty|
| mezzie 10/5/05 . chapter 1
so many lines in this to love...the water verse is incredible, and naturally the last line is so right.
| not sure yet 1/1/05 . chapter 1
very interesting, i love afi, dark imagery, and peculiar, muchly beautiful to read, awesome job
| Kelpylion 11/6/04 . chapter 1
Beautifully dusty and despondent. I think I prefer this quiet, soft-spoken sort of sadness to the more common 'I feel like my guts are being ripped out with a spork' poetry, probably because I've written too much of the later category. I generally loved the 'abandoned city' theme, and the fact that you turned around a song I personally cannot stand (sorry 'bout that) and presented the ideas in a totally different way.
P.S: yeah, you found the Eliot reference. We'd just read 'The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock' in school, and that one line about daring to eat a peach was just irresistible.
| this is britt 7/25/04 . chapter 1
I am convinced you can do no wrong, and your talent floods through every line of this. My mouth is practically watering, Clarie, it was brilliant and unabashedly beautiful! I love it!
| Fabian Cortez 7/25/04 . chapter 1
This is a beautifully crafted poem.
| evilDif 7/25/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful, I absolutely loved it. I haven't comprehended it too well yet, but it was still so enchanting. Excellent, I'll say.