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Murphy's Lawyer 2006-08-08 . chapter 3
okay you better update soon, got it, cause if I don't hear more soon, I will be PEVED. For lack of a better word. Heehee.

Yes I've been reading a lot of your stories today. Good luck getting through the reviews crammed into your inbox, and I look forward to more on this story.
Broken Telephone 2006-04-28 . chapter 3
Awesome chappie, my friend! I love it! I'm totally adding this to my faveys.
Broken Telephone 2006-04-28 . chapter 2
Aww this is so sweet! I love it!
Broken Telephone 2006-04-28 . chapter 1
Oh! I'm hooked!
Deafgurl's world 2006-02-28 . chapter 3
Hey! Wow! Levi and Blaire meet. I wonder if they will end up together because of their hearts? How can they broke the curse? I cant believe it. Hurry update soon.
JCMY 2005-08-11 . chapter 2
hey me again, i think theres some grammar to be worked on, and you keep swapping between tenses, that makes it confusing.but apart from that, cool
JCMY 2005-08-11 . chapter 1
this sounds like romeo and juliet! how the diff families hate each other!this is good, i like this.
brokenxdreams 2005-05-25 . chapter 1
wow... this looks interesting.. keep up the good work
Maureen 2005-03-13 . chapter 1
Hey, this ones gonna be really good too. I like how u connected the grandparents and it all collides together itll make the story more interesting. Good luck in finishing! :-)
Envierose 2005-02-27 . chapter 3
I want to read more! It's not fair! You can't stop!
mystery_chick27 2005-02-19 . chapter 3
hurry up and finish this story. It's a good story, i actually really like it but you seem to not want to finish it. hurry up already.
Areya 2005-01-15 . chapter 1
Sounds exactly like a modern Romeo and Juliet. Good job.
J. A. Rowan 2004-12-30 . chapter 3
Please keep wrighting cuz i cant wait to see what happens next.
Sweetly Sarcastic 2004-12-04 . chapter 3
I give you points for originality but then subtract a few for lack of comprhension. Didn't quite understand the last part, so if you could work on that it would be great. Other than that it rocked. *applause*
rocker~chik 2004-10-10 . chapter 2
you have got to finish this story. it's really good
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