Wow, really well written. Deep, dark and meaningful. I'm glad I got to read it... yeah in the end I was kind of rooting for Vincent and De to end up together =P It is just a little creepy the whole Jake/De romance... but that's just me. Anywho, I hope this story has helped you out. Though, in saying that I sound like the author =P The title belongs to you. Thanks for writing.

Wow, Jake's got a potty mouth and a dirty mind in this chapter XD

I'm really enjoying this story so far, though. It's really good and original. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I've only read the first chapter and I feel like I'm already hooked! This story really starts off nicely. I also really like how you discribe your characters. I can practically see them in my head.

although reading something like this isn't my thing i enjoyed as much as anyone can knowing it 's similar to a true story. Being through kind of similar situation i can relate to De and i understand your reason for creating Vinny, who doesn't want someone that understand him completely ! i know it's year's later but i hope you found someone ...

I loved this. I seriously did. I'm crying right now. I really am. That was so sad. I understand why you're ending and normally I'd feel a little sad that its ending but in this case I feel as if it is right.

Not wanting to sound like anyone else but we all got our devils, yeah? Some of us got more dreadful ones than the others.

We're all screwed up anyway, so does it matter?

Darlin', you deserve a hug. (HUG)

Thanks for the awesome story, I got a glimpse of something remotely like hell.

Now, gotta keep those damned prejudiced people to shut the ** up and my life will be just dainty.

"Don't afraid to be yourself. The people who care don't matter, the people who matter don't care."

Hope you got someone to make you smile when your days are down, yeah?

Best of lucks and kudos to the little "De'Angelo Massina" in all of us.

I wonder if I'm the only one who caught that comment about a 'redheaded brat named Destin'? lol
Are you referring to the Destin in Finding Heaven?
I wonder... Either way, back to reading!! Kyaah!
-Emi

Nice story. Good plot. Moderate grammer. Please update. I'm an author myself and i wouldn't mind your honest opinion. If you're not busy of sourse.

-Emauel J. Levictus

This was very well written.
Very.
I think I liked De'angelo the best... But I seem to always like the troubled charachters. Does your psychologist recommend you to write these kind of stories too?
What a coincidence. Your writing is wonderful, and I'll probably read your next story if you get to writing one.
Once again, that was wonderful...

it would be a good story but your ideas are kinda all over the place and its hard to follow.

You need a beta

And stop with the anime references it totally takes away from the plot, makes you sound like an air head

it's horrible
not the writing
you know what i mean.


i think it is always hard to write reviews for stories so deeply horrifying.
your words kind of get jumbled and your chest really heavy.

someone had to write it though.

It's nearly 1:30 AM and I've refused to go to bed until I've finished this story. I liked it, it was an interesting read, and I'm sorry it has to end but I understand that it's what you have to do for you.

I've found that writing is a great way to just, I don't know, escape? I hope this helped you overcome some things, though I know it won't ever make it all go away.

I can't say I understand exactly what your main character was going through, but I know there are a lot of people that have had it so much worse then me.

I'd like to thank you for writing this. Really, it actually meant something to me; its probably one in a thousand stories on Fictionpress that do.

Ahh. I have school tomorrow, so I'll be on my way now.

Goodnight.

I must say that i loved this last chapter. And i like De with Vincent way better then him with Jake. It's way cuter. I really hope that writing this did help you out ... even a little bit ( i know reading it has been help for me, so thanks) Well i'm off to read Deviant, i've been away from your stories for way too long (damn collge lol) Cheers!

Poor De, and Jake, I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update. ^.^

I'm really glad you never had them together. It's hard to find a more realistic story in that sense -- you know, the teacher in love with the student and student in love with him, people always make them consumate their love even if it's not legal. And imo, the teacher would have to be pretty twisted to take advantage of the kid, so I'm glad that since you made Jake seem pretty stable for the most part that you didn't have them together. It's much more realistic, much more understandable.
And I'm really sorry you've been through this sort of thing, and hoped writing this story helped.