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Forbidden Romance360 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseNice story. Good plot. Moderate grammer. Please update. I'm an author myself and i wouldn't mind your honest opinion. If you're not busy of sourse. -Emauel J. Levictus
sakiikumi 2008-02-08 ch 10,	abuseThis was very well written. Very. I think I liked De'angelo the best... But I seem to always like the troubled charachters. Does your psychologist recommend you to write these kind of stories too? What a coincidence. Your writing is wonderful, and I'll probably read your next story if you get to writing one. Once again, that was wonderful...
danny 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseit would be a good story but your ideas are kinda all over the place and its hard to follow. You need a beta And stop with the anime references it totally takes away from the plot, makes you sound like an air head
Aquafied 2007-11-21 ch 10,	abuseit's horrible not the writing you know what i mean. i think it is always hard to write reviews for stories so deeply horrifying. your words kind of get jumbled and your chest really heavy. someone had to write it though.
Modern Actide 2007-02-06 ch 10,	abuseIt's nearly 1:30 AM and I've refused to go to bed until I've finished this story. I liked it, it was an interesting read, and I'm sorry it has to end but I understand that it's what you have to do for you. I've found that writing is a great way to just, I don't know, escape? I hope this helped you overcome some things, though I know it won't ever make it all go away. I can't say I understand exactly what your main character was going through, but I know there are a lot of people that have had it so much worse then me. I'd like to thank you for writing this. Really, it actually meant something to me; its probably one in a thousand stories on Fictionpress that do. Ahh. I have school tomorrow, so I'll be on my way now. Goodnight.
Nocturnal-Fire 2006-12-22 ch 10,	abuseI must say that i loved this last chapter. And i like De with Vincent way better then him with Jake. It's way cuter. I really hope that writing this did help you out ... even a little bit ( i know reading it has been help for me, so thanks) Well i'm off to read Deviant, i've been away from your stories for way too long (damn collge lol) Cheers!
Gravilove19 2006-12-21 ch 10,	abusePoor De, and Jake, I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update. ^.^
Vigniti Tres 2006-12-05 ch 10,	abuseI'm really glad you never had them together. It's hard to find a more realistic story in that sense -- you know, the teacher in love with the student and student in love with him, people always make them consumate their love even if it's not legal. And imo, the teacher would have to be pretty twisted to take advantage of the kid, so I'm glad that since you made Jake seem pretty stable for the most part that you didn't have them together. It's much more realistic, much more understandable. And I'm really sorry you've been through this sort of thing, and hoped writing this story helped.
beloved18 2006-12-04 ch 10,	abuseawe no fair i wanted more of this story!
beloved18 2006-12-03 ch 7,	abusei luv the story!
akikodomo 2006-11-26 ch 10, anon.	abuseomg i ** cried when i read this. it is 2 in the morning and i just got done reading this story.it is a sad but addicting story
Little Artemis 2006-11-22 ch 10,	abuseThat's the end? Damn... You aren't even going to consider one last chapter with a grown up De'Angelo, or maybe one on his healing process? I hope I don't sound like I'm whining, but I usually look forward to your stories continuing. It's still a nice story, despite how messed up it is. ~Arty
Kura-sama 2006-11-16 ch 10,	abuseI hope writing the story has helped you to deal with your own past, though sometimes some wounds are always raw. No matter how long has past. Though I can't say what I've experienced even comes half way close to what De has or what you have, I can understand some of your pain. It's been alright with my father for over 6 years and I'm still scared of him. I know he won't do anything in my mom's presence, but whenever he makes a sudden move it still makes my heart race, and I find it so hard to be alone with him. But I live on my own at university now, on the other side of the country, and I feel like I can actually really breath now. I find Stalker a beautiful story, made that much more meaningful because of its personal value to you. I'm actually teary-eyed right now. I probably will read Vincent's story sometime soon ... again. I do believe I have already read Deviant, a long time ago. But I'd love to read it again ^^ Gabatte! Tomorrow will always come.
chinotto 2006-11-12 ch 10,	abuseit's been a very touching story. and somehow, this doesn't feel like an inappropriate/sudden end. it's good that you're doing what you need to :) hug
kazoua 2006-11-10 ch 10,	abuseDamn it. I just wrote a review for you, but my computer froze and gobbled it up. It's hard for me to duplicate something I've already wrote, so I guess my review will be choppy. I love this story. It has been really good. I can't say great because I don't know what great is. But, due to my naivity, I can't figure your story. The characters have always been a favorite point of mine to discuss, but De and Jake are too ambiguous for me to sort and disect like I'd usually do. De is an adorible boy. To me that sounds weird because he shouldn't be adorable at his age, but he is. I think that De is a delusional little boy. May he be, as said, in AP Senior Psychology. Jake is a character I'd rather not dulge into for long. I seriously think he's, not a pedophile, but prone to pedophilic tendencies. I don't think he is attracted to children, but to second chances. And his particular second chance includes teenaged boys in lots of suffering and pain. AH! I'm sorry, but I can't concentrate on making this review in depth or even benefitial to you at all. Reading your author note at the bottom unscrewed every screw in my brain. I somehow reasoned, through a couple years of being an advid fan of fictionpress works, that most stories are composed of facies and facts. Originally, I always have a somewhat thought that maybe ~this~ author knows what their talking about, but somewhere throughout the chapters it befalls me that the story was completely made up and fancified. So I've come, more recently, to read memiors. But your ending note caused me to draw back a little and say, "Dang..." Ah, well. I wish you well, good luck in the future, a lifetime of happiness, and another good idea for a new story.

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