 DaDel Amor 2005-04-10 . chapter 1I like this, it's nice. Short but descriptive. |
 Twizzlers 2004-08-13 . chapter 1I like this one a lot. I like that you're in a bed of a truck of all places viewing such peaceful scenery. Nicely done. >>Twizz |
 William Winters 2004-08-02 . chapter 1No deeper meaning, no inner thoughts...just a pleasant little space-user. That much less space for the hyper-depressing poems that populate fictionpress. Keep going! |
 Lady Saleci Loramma 2004-07-29 . chapter 1I love how you transport the reader and make them see and feel what you are seeing and feeling. Lovely poem, it seems to radiate peace and harmony. Great job. -LSL
P.S. Your last post script was a bit confusing. |
 Teacup Majoram 2004-07-25 . chapter 1Nice poem, good job. |