This one is rather odd, but it's still good, because of the oddity. It really creates an interesting, quite unique character, an amazing thing in such a small space.

That's pretty sad.. pretty powerful though. Really can't help wishing that things had been different for Christopher.. it's such a shame. I love how well the story and lyrics fit together, in terms of meaning and placement.

*squeals* I love the song you put with the most wonderful ficcy! I find that the fic goes perfectly with the song, I loved it^^ I think your becoming my favorite author!

Depressing; yes, Excellent; yes. Have read both stories, but fp won't accept a review at Chapter 2 for me *rolls eyes*. Great stuff.

Wow. I just got home from camp, but this was amazing. Almost how I feel, yet way more extreme. Very good story though. Best one-shot I have ever read. You really have talent as a writer. The feelings were so real in this story, but you scare me a tad... hope it's nothing to do with your life... well anyways, I gotta run. \
Keep writing

Soz this is late! Just got back from camp! I loved this. I love the song and it fit so well with the story. :)

I have nothing to say this time at all...but all can say is that I hope that christopher is in a better place...
* whipes a tear from her face*

Wow, that was good. I enjoyed it greatly. It makes me want to cry. Really it does. You should do more writing, and I'm waiting for the others to be updated.
-Jo