its good, one mistake 'evreryone'd'dnt u think its a bit harsh though. i mean kids in some countries dnt get to go to school and they all want to. i mean yer some lessons are boring but dnt u enjoy hanging with ya m8s all day? i lke school, not cos im a geek but i like to learn about stuff. and hang with my m8s. Its up 2 you, everyone thinks differnetly!
Haz Almighty

I'd say this was one of my favorites...might actually move up into the number one spot actually. Seemed like you put a lot of emotion into it. (If you didn't don't tell me, lol)

Wow you are so much better than me. Keep writing cause I want to read more/

Wow, this is great. Keep writing.