Reviews for What To Do If I Ever Have Magic Powers

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Elaes Mada 2007-10-07 ch 2,	I quoted you on my profile; "Two foolish generals make a long and bloody war." If you would rather I didn't, please let me know. If this isn't your quote, please let me know that, too. =p Btw, this story (I've read the whole thing, but the review makes most sense here) makes me laugh - a lot - so please, continue on, lol.
Celey 2007-09-14 ch 6,	Oh, yay! More chapters! I hope you continue to keep this story going... It's getting really good. And Fred really is an interesting character... I mean, with the way he's treating Simon, he's kind of acting like a good guy, but clearly he's on the side of evil because of how quick he was to lie to Simon. It's very peculiar... Fascinating... Heh... I wonder what else can go wrong?
Elaes Mada 2007-08-10 ch 1,	ROFL, just started reading, but it's great so far. Really liked the bureaucratic run around on phone. Now back to reading the rest ...
Leah Claire 2007-04-30 ch 5,	E! You updated!...a while ago. I love this, and David's sarcasm and Lisa's denseness. I hope you update some more!
chelchia 2006-03-24 ch 1,	You're able to draw from the world of varied lit genres surrounding you, to re-make something that is entirely your own. cliched, but true. and that in itself is a cliche. You attain a balance between the stories that you read, and capture it in minimal words. Too bad you leave your work incomplete. Then again, keeping things short and sweet would be your trademark.I'm rambling.
Avalon Hybrid 2005-07-26 ch 4,	Dude, this is awesome, the best feckin' parody I've ever read! Update soon!
ThamesRelic 2005-06-07 ch 4,	I absolutely loved this! This is possibly the best thing I have ever read on FictionPress. Good show chap!
The Ducky Pirate 2005-05-19 ch 4,	Lol. Love the spoof. Hope you keep going with this, I'd like to see David kick the "magical girl"'s butt..heh-heh.
Celey 2004-11-27 ch 4,	Man... meesa misses ya on the board... //^_^\\'... Dunno if you have Review Alert or anything... but ahh well... Loved the story... Hope it gets updated and all... Heh... I like the part where David finds out that zombies (Or rather Thrall) were just looking for a wrench... Bwhahahaha... //^_^\\'... Could just imagine his perplexed expression...
Emer 2004-11-05 ch 1,	I think you should update. Pleasepleaseplease.
Marry the Orange 2004-08-17 ch 4,	hahahahahaha! I'm very much still laughing. That story reminds me so much of Terry Pratchett and Eoin Colfer's Artemis Fowl. With the idiot wizards and human culture influence on them, the magic/technology interlay and it still keeps itself hilarious without going overboard. The depth of the characters. Poochi-tron. Ah. I really like Stan, he's been my favorite character so far and David's comments are brilliant. My only setback is that they're all so young... oh well, brilliant job! Write!
zephrbabe 2004-08-11 ch 4,	This story is amazing. The characters have depth (well, not Lisa :P), the situations are plausible in a magical way, there is enough description for a short story, and the background info is well thought out. The only problem I have is that Stan and David are way too cynical for 13 year olds (I would believe it if they were 30 year olds in disguse as 13 y.o.). I can't wait for the next installment.
Leah Claire 2004-08-05 ch 4,	Each chapter is just as good as the last. Have you ever read "Deep Secret" by Diana Wynne Jones? The plot is nothing like this, and the characters aren't even very similar, except the main one who is a Magid and gets a bad job like David's dumped on him from his superiors. I think you'd enjoy it. I didn't even realize David was 13, but I like that you haven't dumbed him down. So many writers think any one below the age of 20 automatically lacks intelligence, and they've totally forgotten what it was like to be young and have their opinions devalued because of their age. Um, anyway. I'm sure that's not the sort of stuff you were thinking of when you wrote it, but I like it all the same. Hope you get the next part up soon!
Leah Claire 2004-08-05 ch 2,	I totally love Stan and his bat cave. And the dialog is just excellent. I noticed that there isn't a space between the demon section and the David/Stan section, which might be fictionpress.net's fault, but I just thought I'd give you a heads up.
Fia 2004-08-05 ch 1,	CHAPTER 4 ..is just as good. =D We meet an Elder, see David's (secret) real room, meet his mom and we also find out what the main plotline is to be for the rest of the series. Read it - it makes you feel good. It's well written. TheSeer's stuff is awesome!

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