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| anju 2008-06-26 ch 24, anon. | abusevery sweet |
| Miss Secret 2008-06-22 ch 24,  | abusecute story! it's funny though--how you have a pretty creative plot revolving around a cliche (enemies to lovers). I don't really like how you ended it though, i mean, by the way they made up. i like how their friends set them up but i thought that alyssa was too nice. like, it was too quick. stuff like that. lol |
| Miss Secret 2008-06-22 ch 16, | abuse"biggest ** of a headache" i don't know why, but i like the wording. haha |
| Miss Secret 2008-06-22 ch 13, | abusesexual tension..yum |
| Miss Secret 2008-06-22 ch 12, | abuseLOL. that is so cute. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-06 ch 24, | abuseThat was such an adorable story. At first I wasn't crazy about your story since it seemed a bit half-assed but then your writing got a lot better. You totally made me hooked and the entire idea was incredible. Awesome job :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty original and I liked it but you had a few grammar mistakes that you may want to look over. :) |
| Shishou 2008-05-04 ch 24, | abuseOh, this was so sweet! I really loved Troy's apology and a kiss thing. It was very cute and it made me hate Alyssa for a moment. Okay, a moment or two. lol Loved this story! One of my favorites on FP for sure! |
| Shishou 2008-05-03 ch 19, | abuseI've been reading and was planning on reviewing at the end since this story is complete, but I just HAD to comment on this chapter. It made me giggle like the school girl I am. Nicole I envision as this annoying girl I knew my first year of high school, ironically named Nicole. She was nicknamed the Tree by me and my friends behind her back, so when she was in front of us, we'd just say the Tree. Kinda mean, but if you were there, I bet you'd be saying the Tree too, lol. Troy was adorable in this chapter, being all cocky and having the upper hand. I especially liked his views on Nicole. Keith's reappearance made me very, very happy, because Alyssa and he were able to wipe that smirk off Troy's face. Although, Keith didn't exactly mean it the same way Alyssa did. Oh, well. |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseadding to faves. |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseadding to faves |
| dreambrother63 2008-04-27 ch 24, | abuseoh WOW that was amazing! it was so brilliant and now i've done absolutely nothing all day except read it. nicole was such a **! ness |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-04-26 ch 24, | abuseHahahahaha so cute! lol sry xx |
| random2one 2008-04-15 ch 24, | abuseWow! That was such a good story! I just finished reading it, and I must say it was just awesome! Good job on it! |
| sonyamonya 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseHi, well i have to say i love this story very much. i've read it too many times to count. Keep on writing! :) |