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Reviews For: Love & Death

Lady Kirix
2005-04-22
ch 1,
wow sweet, death very intereting ohh i want more now :( *looks at story summary* tis not a one-shot at least you didnt say soo... more chapters soon please!
YamiHoshi
2004-08-08
ch 1,
Wow that was...different. Very cool, but also very different. I hope you post more soon.
Andrea Araujo
2004-07-28
ch 1,
That was really good. It would even be greater if you decided to make into a full-length story. Great Job! ^_^
~*~Andrea Araujo~*~
Aeravis
2004-07-28
ch 1,
This is very interesting! It sort of gave me inspiration, thank you lol. Good job with the writing, by the way. You used detail!
Nightly Rain
2004-07-26
ch 1,
i like it! ^_^ my suggestion is to use some more shorter sentences. I know, it's hard! -_- but it'll help your story a lot!
~Nightly Rain
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