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| Lady Kirix 2005-04-22 ch 1,   | wow sweet, death very intereting ohh i want more now :( *looks at story summary* tis not a one-shot at least you didnt say soo... more chapters soon please! |
| YamiHoshi 2004-08-08 ch 1, | Wow that was...different. Very cool, but also very different. I hope you post more soon. |
| Andrea Araujo 2004-07-28 ch 1, | That was really good. It would even be greater if you decided to make into a full-length story. Great Job! ^_^ ~*~Andrea Araujo~*~ |
| Aeravis 2004-07-28 ch 1, | This is very interesting! It sort of gave me inspiration, thank you lol. Good job with the writing, by the way. You used detail! |
| Nightly Rain 2004-07-26 ch 1, | i like it! ^_^ my suggestion is to use some more shorter sentences. I know, it's hard! -_- but it'll help your story a lot! ~Nightly Rain |