Again, nice expression of what you feel!

Very emotional. I like the imagery with the toilet scene. This seems like it could be a song (what with the rhythym and beat) it's just a thought.
p.s. have you "getting away with murder" by papa roach? it's my favorite song, and seeing as we like almost the same music...

Interesting imagery. I'm not sure I really liked it, but the imagery was fierce, so if that's what you were going for...