This is good, you have a great rhyme scheme going, though it falters in some places. You have an ABAB scheme, where B is what rhymes, but "good" (line 10) doesn't have anything to rhyme with. Gosh, I hope you understand what I mean. It's hard to explain when I can't physically point it out. Anywho, I liked it.

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Wow! I like the rythym it has, and they "I'm very glad to know you" at the end was an interesting twist! Cool! The only line that doesn't seem to flow quite so well in the "loyal, lovely, loathsome, kind" one. Write on!

cool poem...keep writing