ah, i can relate. nicely done trisha. captures the mood greatly.

The last line was a killer. More personal than the other one, but this had an undeniable affect as well.
Good work. And thanks for the review.
PS
Yes, I do have an orc poem. Titled "Love me, Urgren".

I like this very much. It reminds me of myself, this poem. Very good. :) And thank you very much for your review of my poem.
~ Tempest Epilogue

Must be a wonderful feeling. Nicely written, and thanks for the review.